Jigsaw

Somewhere in another room, a telephone rings. Nobody moves. The phone rings on, and on. Ring-ring. Ring-ring. Twenty-four times. Twenty-five times. Twenty-six times.

“Are you going to answer that?” says the guest, raising her eyebrows.

The host looks up from his jigsaw puzzle. He lifts a piece to his lips and runs his tongue along the edge.

“It’s not for me,” says the host.

Ring-ring. Ring-ring.

“How do you know?” reasons the guest. “It’s your house, it’s your phone. It could be important.”

The host shakes his head. “I don’t believe so. If it was for me, it would have rung in here.” He returns to his jigsaw puzzle, trying to fit blue pieces next to orange pieces. Licking the edges, not seeing patterns.

Ring-ring. Ring-ring.

The guest suppresses her annoyance. She sits on a chair nearer to the host. Rubs her chin with her fingers, tries to adopt an innocent expression.

“Are you sure the telephones work like that?” she asks. “Perhaps the one in this room is broken?”

The host sighs, looks at her with a pitying expression.

“Alright,” he says. “If it will make you feel better, I will go and demonstrate.” The host gets up from his chair, being careful not to upset his puzzle, and heads out the door.

As his footsteps faint away, the guest sneaks over to the jigsaw puzzle. She places the edges in the shape of a frame, then puts pieces where they belong, leaving just a few pieces unconnected.

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2 thoughts on “Jigsaw

  1. jaredpetermcd

    The way you were able to give this much substance to both characters in this short a story was fantastic. You left me with an idea of who both characters were and their relationship, but still left me guessing.
    Cool stuff.

    Reply
  2. myothervoices

    Something quite mysterious to this that I like, the ringing phone and the host’s dismissal of it suggestive of something weird. The guest might finish the jigsaw but something else that they won’t like might happen

    Reply

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